ve story
ve is twelve
ve has been twelve for a long time
ve travels in a spaceship
with vis dad
most of the time they're in hibernation
when ve monitors the systems
ve likes to read books
a journey to planets takes long
now they live on a dark blue planet
where navy clouds don't have shapes
and neither do shadows
dad reminds ver
to be careful around local kids
ve has a disease
vis tears are toxic
lethally to the people of the navy snow
ve is so happy to have a friend
to play with on the cushioned ledges
to take ver on adventure
they sit swinging their legs
as always
somewhat apart
1 comment:
I'm not satisfied with the description of the planet ("now they live [...] neither do shadows"): repetitive, not picturesque, not relevant.
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